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Another Year Without You
Contributed by
Aquaelius
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Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 06:32:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
AnniversaryPoems
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From the first moment, I felt that I've known you forever,
and I remember the way I used to look at you.
Everytime you touched me, I was made for that moment,
and I remember the way your voice used to call me.
In each kiss you gave, nothing existed only you and me,
and I remember the words of love we shared.
My days feel empty, a shell.
I don't know anymore, I can only guess.
My only companions are why and God.
I can remember each time I gave you a rose,
each time that I would wait for you to open the door,
each time I wanted to stay awake talking with you.
And another year goes by,
and I try to forget,
but all I can remember is how much I love you.
Copyright ©
Aquaelius
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2004-10-20 06:32:45] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Another Year Without You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rxqueen on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 06:55:27 AM AEST (User
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Sweetness, you seriously brought tears to my eyes. What a lovely but tragic poem. I absolutely loved it and I hope you find a love like that again... Beautiful write! |
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Re: Another Year Without You
(User Rating: 1 ) by faith_my_eyes on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 09:04:02 AM AEST (User
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That sense of loss is hard to overcome, indeed. I didn't lose the love of my life, but my father, who is any girl's first love. I feel your pain. |
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Re: Another Year Without You
(User Rating: 1 ) by New_York_Chick on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 04:23:15 PM AEST (User
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this is very touching
i've been there myself and at times i honestly think i can never get over |
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Re: Another Year Without You
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 05:48:38 AM AEST (User
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Sad but beautifully written.
I can so relate.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Another Year Without You
(User Rating: 1 ) by europeanprincess on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 09:28:42 PM AEST (User
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this is a good poem. i feel this way for a man now, how can i approach him and tell him? will u be able to go back to this person? perhaps one day it will happen to both of us again. thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Another Year Without You
(User Rating: 1 ) by spider on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 01:52:21 PM AEST (User
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another really great write. keep reading it over and over even though i dont want to........ its really sad :( |
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