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In Death's Hate
Contributed by
screwup
on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 06:32:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I look in the mirror
and hate what I see
I hate that girl
staring at me
the scars upon her skin
the blades sinking in
her pain she could not bare
and all the people who never cared
she wants to live
but also wants to die
she is so torn
so torn up inside
so she cuts away her pain
and no one understands why
so many brusies
this is why she cries
she needs an outlet in life
that doesn't involve a knife
she can't wait to get away
from this pain she lives everyday
memories of the beatings
are fresh in her mind
love in her life
is hard to find
she hates her dad
and the way he makes her mad
her friends constantly worry about her
they always check her arms
to see if there's been more harm
the cuts she makes
on her arm look like scratches
but the ones on her legs
look more like gashes
with all the abuse
she never wanted to stay
she knows now it'll never be okay
so deep inside, always wishing she was dead
so the next time she cuts
she welcomes the red
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Re: In Death's Hate
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by Aquaelius on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 06:35:45 AM AEST
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| yo, that's sorta deep there, the poem not the cuts... I think that you conveyed your message pretty well. wow. |
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Re: In Death's Hate
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by Rxqueen on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 07:00:22 AM AEST
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| That was a really good one. Brave of you to share it. Cutting is so freaking addictive... It goes away... but the urge will sneak up on you again. I hope you learn to love yourself and get into a better place in life. You are very talented. Keep writing. It is a good way to get your emotions out rather that cutting and making ugly scars. And if ya ever want to talk pm me. Good write sweetness! |
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Re: In Death's Hate
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 06:35:33 PM AEST
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Great job, hun. i really liked the floe of the poem. It was very descriptive and I could identify. Sorry life has to suck so bad... :-(
Felix The Great |
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Re: In Death's Hate
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 02:38:50 PM AEST
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oh Deanna. it's so painful to read, so i cant emagine what if took out of you to write. it brought tears to my eyes. you really need to get some help! 'coz we both know that i'm gonna be here but you need some some to hold your hand and help youall the way through this. all of us (being your mates) care and love you so much but i think that there's only so much we can do for you... but it's your choice what you do isn't it?
but no matter wha i Will supportou all the way, i promise! |
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