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no more tears
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 12:11:34 AM in AEST
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i try to live a peaceful life
for i have known both pain and strife
then in rushes hurricane in highheels
that witch who never cares how i feel
away out the window flies serenity
whilst preaches errors miss divinity
never looking through her own window
everyone else is so decidedly low
though no more tears shall i shed
i wish the wicked witch was dead
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Re: no more tears
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 12:19:41 AM AEST
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| simply beautiful..very nice expressions..like to read you again..hugs dear friend:-)venkat |
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Re: no more tears
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by a_bear on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 12:32:05 AM AEST
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then...ding dong the witch is dead...the wicked witch..ding dong the wicked witch is dead!!!
I wish I could take your pain..I know people who try to steal serenity..don't let them ... or her..breathe deep and grab it back! Darn her!!! Take a deep breath and get that peace back!!!!
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Re: no more tears
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by Rxqueen on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 02:53:02 AM AEST
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| I really liked that. It was dark and cute at the same time. Good write! |
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Re: no more tears
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by thumper on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 05:07:41 AM AEST
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Ladyfawn?? Wishing someone dead??? I never thought...... I thoroughly enjoyed this. Short and cute and to the point! Ignore her and let it go in one ear and out the other. ;o} Peace to you, Lady.
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Re: no more tears
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 05:46:16 AM AEST
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i really like this poem, thanks for sharing.
Jane |
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Re: no more tears
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 06:26:56 AM AEST
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wow, never read anything like this from you before, but your emotions made fora great write, takecare *hugs*
love,
pixie xx |
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Re: no more tears
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 07:49:10 AM AEST
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| Wonderful write with great expression. Tis something different from you, but still a wonderful write.........Mike |
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Re: no more tears
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 09:01:41 AM AEST
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Learning to live with our travails is never easy, but it is the only way we grow. An interesting write. I think I may know this witch.
Best,
Stitch |
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Re: no more tears
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 11:44:05 AM AEST
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May peace be yours again very soon.
Great poem stand tall and strong you shall overcome this
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: no more tears
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by tifrob on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 01:14:40 AM AEST
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I loved this...
"though no more tears shall i shed
i wish the wicked witch was dead"
...Sorry, but I laughed out loud...
You Go Girl,
J~ |
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Re: no more tears
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by yellow_sundragon on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 02:30:27 PM AEST
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I really like those last two lines.... and I have a feeling I know who this wicked mean witch is.
I like this.... I like the way you wrote this, almost like a perverse fairytale.
Jaime |
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Re: no more tears
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 06:29:21 PM AEST
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Those are three
awesome stanzas.
Cool stuff.
--Mothy |
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Re: no more tears
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 02:31:09 PM AEST
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She'll get whats coming to her one day, every bad turn she has dealt will turn back and smack her straight in the face. I just wish I could be there to see the woman who has caused my family so much pain to fall to her knees.
Hugs 'n Love
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Re: no more tears
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 05:56:54 PM AEST
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Oh Ness...couldn't help laughing here....sorry. I know how much it hurts... I hope all is well soon, but hey...GREAT write.....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: no more tears
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by emystar on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 11:51:11 PM AEST
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Hang tuff, my friend as joy cometh in the morning.
This too soon shall pass.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: no more tears
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by BuTTerFly_LoVe on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:42:23 AM AEST
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I like this really enjoyed reading great work
HeNo UnKnOwN buTtERfLY |
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Re: no more tears
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by SweetRhythm on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 11:03:37 AM AEST
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Gripping piece from you Nessa. Very interesting indeed, I loved how well each verse ran into the next. You really gave it your all. Nice work, enjoyed the read.
Corinna |
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Re: no more tears
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 11:16:55 PM AEST
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Great poem.
Scott |
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Re: no more tears
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 09:11:45 PM AEST
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| =], yes we wish many things, if only they all came true. very nice writing as usual, nessa |
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Re: no more tears
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by Blackheart on
Tuesday, 8th July 2014 @ 10:28:22 PM AEST
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Ain't nothing like beautiful darkness in a poem...that's what you have with this poem, I love it :)
Hugs & love,
Donavan |
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Re: no more tears
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by colinb on
Saturday, 19th July 2014 @ 03:14:58 AM AEST
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| Dark excellent write |
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