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Hold Me!
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 12:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Hold me now for I'm falling apart,
I love you with all my heart,
But I'm loseing control,hold on,
somethings not right,it feels wrong,
Hold me,please don't let go,
I need you now,don't you know,
If I fall,I know you'll catch me,
Thats where I need you to be,
Right here helping me to grasp,
Life is not a easy task,
I might lose my grip,
Please don't let me slip,
Hold on tight as tight as you can,
Because I know I'll slip through your hand,
You can hold on better than me,
I need you to hold on to me!
Copyright ©
LOWMAN613
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2002-11-16 12:20:00]
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Re: Hold Me!
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by OreO on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 01:39:55 PM AEST
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This is so sad and beautiful
at the same time, it hurts when
we feel we are falling and we
fear that someone special
might let us slip, this is beautiful
Christina, Thanks for sharing this
one . Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Hold Me!
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by Yellowrose on
Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 12:17:36 AM AEST
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| This is a heartwrenching poem. I pray he will stay close to you to help you whenever you might slip and start to fall. (((Hugs))) Yellowrose |
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Re: Hold Me!
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by LayDownPlayDead on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 09:26:10 PM AEST
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| This one was so sad but so lovely. I loved the emotions it showed. Beautiful.. |
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Re: Hold Me!
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by Love_impossible on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 12:08:13 PM AEST
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I think we all have felt like that. At least I have, and at that moment there was nobody around, I was all alone, but I made it through.
Barely made it tho... |
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