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Last Feeling

Contributed by sweetolbaby on Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Let me have this one hug
so i can feel ya body and you can feel mine
just have one more kiss from me
so i can feel ya lips on mine
have one more last phone conversation
and let's talk about something deep
something we never talked about
you know, you and me
your're leaving me a few days from now
but i'll always save the memories
of the little moments we spent together
and how you made me happy
this last feeling is killing me
when i'm thinking back
all the time i could've caressed you
massaged ya back
over your house I would come
and we would talk and do whateva for hours
but you was w/ someone else and I was too
both of us knew they were wasting our time
should've jumped on you
from the get go
but i was too shy
just to let you know
let you know how much of a good friend you were to me;
and how i want you to neva forget me
hope to see you around
down this long road of life
just as long as we friends
keep me in ya mind
last feeling

Copyright © sweetolbaby ... [ 2002-11-16 12:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Last Feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 11:24:44 PM AEST
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good poem and concept. nicely done.

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