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Pickup
Contributed by
CodyJ
on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 09:08:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Scratchin' that itch
at a local bar,
I've got this chick
lined up in sight
with all my might
I saddle up to her
real close
just to see
her wrinkled nose
maybe she caught
a whiff of something
maybe she wasn't digging
what I was offering.
So I cast a line
hoping for a bite
to keep me warm
on this cold night.
She tossed it back,
in nothing flat,
I was on the floor
out the door
and on the street
beneath my feet
I don't have far
to another bar.
Copyright ©
CodyJ
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2004-10-19 21:08:08]
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Re: Pickup
(User Rating: 1 )
by blacksabbath026 on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 11:23:23 PM AEST
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| very good, simple yet ifinite |
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Re: Pickup
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 03:54:10 PM AEST
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| This was cute and comical. Made me laugh! Good job! |
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