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GOODBYE
Contributed by
rie
on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 07:45:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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You left today, just slipped away
no sound, no fear just passed away.
a sunny day, blue skies await,
you float away, time will not wait
your goodbyes said, no time to wait.
a vietnam vet so proud we are,
a man of honour, your heart is great.
your in our thoughts, our hopes and dreams.
today you left, far too young, but at peace at rest at last.
you could not wait.
memories our ours now and time goes on.
your in our hearts.
let go fly away.
the sun is shining so warm and true,
this lovely blue day is yours today and forever, remembered always for you.
Copyright ©
rie
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2004-10-19 19:45:04]
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Re: GOODBYE
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by Live2Die on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 07:48:06 PM AEST
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| ahh sad. That really suckz, i mean that your uncle died. But the poem is excellent! |
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Re: GOODBYE
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 09:19:01 PM AEST
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Good poem, Rie...... I am sorry for your loss..
I haven't seen you in ages, but I haven't been on ICQ much lately...
Take care of yourself......
Jenni |
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Re: GOODBYE
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 03:25:33 AM AEST
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I'm sorry for your loss.At last the pain for him will be gone.Makes you think about war though really.....all that ever seems to do is bring suffering.
Take care
Steve |
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Re: GOODBYE
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 06:43:10 AM AEST
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I am sorry to hear about your uncle, he has gone to a good place, no more pain and suffering, this is a very moving poem, *hugs*
pixie xx |
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