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Everything I See
Contributed by
caughtinadream
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Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 07:15:51 PM in AEST
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I look into the mirrors ugly reflection
It's no wonder I fear rejection.
If I could fix the parts of me that are broken
Maybe the door of love would freely open.
I look at the faces of people so perfect
I could change myself, but would I be worth it?
I would die for a healthy heart
But somehow I always seem to be torn apart.
I want love to be by my side
When I find it, it always seems to hide.
I guess I'll just wait, theres nothing else to do
I guess I have to wait, cause I'm waiting for you.
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Re: Everything I See
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by macmcgovern on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 09:44:25 PM AEST
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Beautifully written. Regardless of to whom it applies, the beauty is from within and anything created in his image has got to be, by definition, beautiful. A powerfuly lovely poem. I like your style. The flow is superb. The talent is obvious. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Everything I See
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by EVERxSOxSWEET on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 05:31:49 PM AEST
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| All your poems are great =] Keep it up ;) but be happy cuz you deserve to be happy! |
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