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Here In My Arms
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 05:45:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I stood in the doorway
And watched as you came and went
My heart traveled your way
How much of our time has been spent
Passing like strangers
Two ships in the night
Longing and aching
As you fade from sight
Leaving me lonely
And wanting you still
Killing me slowly
I'm tortured untill
You're once again
Back in my arms
And for the briefest
Of moments
I hold you and
Keep you from harm
Right here in my arms
When you're in my arms
The world slips away
All I can think of is
How long you'll stay ... this time
And can you read my mind
For you always know
Just what to say
Just how to touch me
To ease all this pain
Every dream you
Seem to fulfill
Then leave once again
I am broken untill
You find your way
Back to my arms
Right here in my arms
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
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2004-10-19 17:45:21]
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Re: Here In My Arms
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 05:55:00 PM AEST
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| i like this one here...very good.. |
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Re: Here In My Arms
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by CaddishCut on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 06:32:20 PM AEST
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Happy, yet blue; touching and true.
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Re: Here In My Arms
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 06:43:37 PM AEST
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Oh, so beautiful Naz. So touching. How your words doth inspire.
And what a rare gift you have, my friend. If only you could purchase
it at the local pharmacy. Yes, drug induced talent. Now there MUST
be a market for that. lol
Seriously, it was simply wonderful, Naz. Too beautiful.
~Breezy |
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Re: Here In My Arms
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 07:04:55 PM AEST
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| awww. I wanna cry. |
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Re: Here In My Arms
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by Ronald on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 01:52:59 AM AEST
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| This is a wonderful poem! Talks so much about LOVE. This is LOVELY! |
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Re: Here In My Arms
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 06:48:55 AM AEST
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awwww sweet and warm, made me sorta drift while i read it :)
pixie xx |
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Re: Here In My Arms
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 12:05:29 PM AEST
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oh, this is beautiful, you have captured the feeling so well, great write:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Here In My Arms
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 01:01:37 PM AEST
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Simply beautiful.
johnny. |
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Re: Here In My Arms
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by FleurdeSang on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 03:09:54 PM AEST
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Beautiful. Perfect. Absolutely enchanting. I love this one! I think this one might be my current favorite. It'll change again when you post another one, lol. They are all soooo good!! A magnificent 'just-because'! Don't you love it when a poem just all of a sudden, BOOM! It's there! And they always end up being one of the most exquisite pieces. ENCORE! Another Standing Ovation, Scott! I LOVED THIS ONE! Anna has come to you and is there to stay, I guess! YAY! Thank you so much for sharing this. I enjoyed it! (as you can plainly see!) All my love and smiles! Forever,
Votre Fleur de Bonheur |
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Re: Here In My Arms
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 03:35:46 PM AEST
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You always use your
title phrases very well.
You can do no wrong.
Curse you.
--Mothy |
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Re: Here In My Arms
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by Willofree on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 07:14:05 PM AEST
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Naz, so touching, loving and romantic. Writing poems about love seems to be another of your talents.
.... "to love and have lost is better then not to have loved at all...."
Willofree
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