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Some Other Time
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 04:53:05 PM in AEST
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( Reincarnation ... soulmates ... what do you believe ? )
She was sittin in the dark
Near the back of the bar
All alone
So I took a chance
And I asked her to dance
But I guess I should've known
She never looked up
She just stared at her cup
I could tell she was gonna decline
She said "Thank you, but no
I'm gettin ready to go
Perhaps some other time."
So I said ...
"In some other past
In some other time
Maybe I was your lover
Maybe you were mine
Maybe I touched your lips
With my finger tips
As we loved away the night
In some other past
Some other time"
It seemed the words touched her heart
For her hurtin started
To show
She began to cry
As she looked in my eyes
Then she let me know
She'd been standing on the shore
Of a river of tears
Waitin' for her ship to come in
She'd been hurt before
And didn't know any more
If she could ever trust love again
Then I said ...
"In some other past
In some other time
Maybe I was your hero
Or maybe you were mine
Maybe I rescued you
And you saved me too
From memories of the night
In some other past
Some other time"
Well, I turned to leave
When she touched my sleeve
And she asked me if I'd stay
So I sat down
Without a sound
And I thought I heard her say
She said ...
"In some other past
Some other time
Maybe I touched your heart
Maybe you caressed mine
Maybe we could try
Later tonight
To find a love we knew
In some other life
In some other past
Some other time
Yes ~
Maybe we could try
Later tonight
To find a love we knew
In some other life
In some other past
Some other time
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
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2004-10-19 16:53:05] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Some Other Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by Live2Die on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 05:06:52 PM AEST (User
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Wow. thats really kewl. *smiles* me likey!! lolz |
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Re: Some Other Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 05:38:26 PM AEST (User
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I absolutely loved this....... wow....
Glad you shared it with us...
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Re: Some Other Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 07:19:35 PM AEST (User
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Wow...Dude, this gave me chill. This was AWESOME!!!!!
Mason
sorry for the all caps...I don't know how to do the html things to get italics...Awesome write |
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Re: Some Other Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 07:20:30 PM AEST (User
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Wow, dude, this gave me chills. This was a seriously awesome write
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Re: Some Other Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 09:34:30 PM AEST (User
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Naz, you've done it again. Your talent astounds me. Just when
I think I've seen your best, you go and post something brilliant!
But I could never pick my favourite. They're all so magnificent. You
are such a creative thinker. Kudos to Nazzy!!!
~Breezy |
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Re: Some Other Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by FleurdeSang on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 02:57:19 PM AEST (User
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Soulmates? Yes, I believe. An all-too-perfect write, divine poet! I can relate very much to a past love that was very much like this. You paint such vivid pictures in my mind! Absolutely beautiful. Thank you for sharing this magnificent piece, Scott. You have blown me away once more. A splendid "dig up" from the past. Glad you found it! Much love, and hugs!
Eternally yours,
Votre fleur de bonheur |
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Re: Some Other Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by Willofree on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 06:54:16 PM AEST (User
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Naz, a great write and a tantalizing story, again on the theme of lost love.
Beautifully written, glad you dug it out to share.
Willofree |
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