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I was
Contributed by
Eastway
on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I was a floating plankton,
Adrift in the Sargasso sea,
I was a budding flower,
Competing with a tree,
I was a fiery comet,
Who flew close to the sun,
I was a raging mountain stream,
A dam I had become,
I was the dream of peace on earth,
And equality of man,
I was passionate to serve my country,
But cried for my mother and ran,
I was not sure that I would ever,
Find a heart that’s true,
But of one thing I am certain,
That Cindy I love you.
Copyright ©
Eastway
... [
2002-11-16 11:00:00]
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Re: I was
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by OreO on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 01:37:02 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful, i really
enjoyed this one, your love flows
through your poetry so beautifully
hope she see's this one, Thanks
for sharing this one
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: I was
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 10:42:26 AM AEST
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Awww...so very romantic....Beautiful work, Eastway...I'm going to look for more of your work now... Welcome to ypdc..
Jenni |
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Re: I was
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by Septic on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 09:43:05 PM AEST
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This is so moving and beautiful - just like the wonderful person who wrote it. One thing's for certain with me too Eastway, I wii always love you too! Thank you x x x x |
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Re: I was
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by Septic on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 09:48:12 PM AEST
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This is so moving and beautiful - just like the wonderful person who wrote it. One thing's for certain with me too Eastway, I will always love you too! Thank you x x x x |
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Re: I was
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by Lovingangel4u on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 11:12:16 PM AEST
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A lovely poem, I enjoyed reading it. ty
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