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Had I Known
Contributed by
Dragons_Of_Rose
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Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 01:12:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Had I known on this journey you'd turn into another dead end road
I would have saved myself the heartache, avoided watching us erode,
Escaped out the back door, dodged where life wanted us to be
Instead of feeding on the pretty lies and invisible broken dreams.
Had I known further down the way we'd end up where we are now
Two close friends who once were lovers but still managing somehow,
I would have fought off the feelings and hid my vulnerable heart
Because just friends is much easier than watching a world fall apart.
Had I known what the future held and what was around the bend
I would have let us go sooner instead of silently suffering till the end,
And now that I've realized these things I also know I took too long
So special thanks to me, my heart doesn't know where it belongs.
© 2004 Amy Marie - www.thepoetsanctuary.net
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Dragons_Of_Rose
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2004-10-19 13:12:28]
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Re: Had I Known
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by PumpkinPie on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 04:27:44 PM AEST
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Very nice piece. These feelings you wrote down are easy to relate to and I think we've all went down that dead-end road at least once in our lives. But had you known all these things beforehand,you wouldn't have learned alot of things in life and you wouldn't have made new aquaintances,become stronger through each heartbreak,etc.Hold your head up high and I wish you much sunshine in your heart.God bless,
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Re: Had I Known
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by Sweetheart on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 07:15:34 PM AEST
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| It made me cry. I'm speechless because I know exactly how you feel. |
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Re: Had I Known
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 08:55:49 PM AEST
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This has a special meaning to me.....
I lost the friendship and the love though.:o(
Very well done
Roses
Larry |
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