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You'll Be All Right
Contributed by
wachumiri
on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 01:07:45 PM in AEST
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A dismal, darkened day
A sad, sickened soul
Cries to see yours
To see your eyes
And hold you tight
To calm your fears
You'll be all right
A weak, wailing whisper
A heavy, healing heart
Cries to yours
And with it sighs
To hold you tight
And dry your tears
We'll be all right
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Re: You'll Be All Right
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 01:11:26 PM AEST
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awww a sweet write,lovely
pixie xx |
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Re: You'll Be All Right
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by faith_my_eyes on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 10:16:03 PM AEST
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this is lovely David *hugs*
I know it will calm carrie's heart |
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Re: You'll Be All Right
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by eatfresh22 on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 04:21:29 PM AEST
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Hmmm...I wonder when you wrote that and what the purpose behind it was? I don't know. Well, I'll just leave it to probability and say that it was your fault. Hahaha. I love you. The alliterations were really beautiful. Creative. Nicely done, beloved.
~Ceima~ |
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Re: You'll Be All Right
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 03:15:11 AM AEST
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I smell alliteration! Don't you know that's a crime?
Good structure, though. *pats on head*
Andrew |
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Re: You'll Be All Right
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 10:35:19 AM AEST
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| I've had those days and this was a nice comforting little write. Cheers! |
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Re: You'll Be All Right
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by anitajames on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 10:26:26 AM AEST
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| Another breathtaking poem. So full of love and tenderness. |
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Re: You'll Be All Right
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by Archie on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 03:11:21 AM AEST
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| You actually could say this to any one who is felling down. But it appropriate to dedicate it to one you love. |
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Re: You'll Be All Right
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 07:15:24 PM AEST
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Beautifully said as always dearest David. With each write I get drawn into ur world. Carrie would've surely loved this one.
*hugs*
Sue |
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Re: You'll Be All Right
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by EcuaOrgullo310 on
Wednesday, 21st January 2009 @ 12:51:57 PM AEST
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that's really sweet...
tee hee.. I love Carrie too. :)
Very heart warming.
with a tinge of sadness. |
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