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The song of the fox
Contributed by
x_midnight_x
on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 01:06:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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darkness falls outside my window
day lights left my sight
i look out at the big pale moon shimmering in the night
the wild woods across the glen
Through the darkness fox i heard you calling.
wounded stumbling and falling
losing the hounds my prayers are with his freedom
a dream short lived
they are abound once more
teeth sharp and claws poisoned
through brambles and stream
heart beating a bad dream
strength fading as the night draws his weak breath
running hiding from death
a bristley red tail dyed black with mud
the sound of a gun
fox i heard you fall
before i end this poem i just want to tell you he is not yet dead!!!!
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Re: The song of the fox
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 01:13:44 PM AEST
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wow, that was a really good write about nature, hard to believe you are only 10 :)
takecare
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Re: The song of the fox
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 01:44:49 PM AEST
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Woah! I am VERY impressed with this 10-year-old poet. Welcome to YPDC! What a story! Moving and well-told.
Stitch |
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