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Please Don't Cry
Contributed by
TheVampireClaudia
on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 12:32:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Please don't cry,
My haunted beauty;
My broken spirit;
It is so disturbing to see an angel cry
Please dry your tears,
Let me mend your broken heart
And remember you as a joyful child
You, my love,
Are my flying snow
My falling rain
My shining sun
To see your pain is
A thousand times your torture
Copyright ©
TheVampireClaudia
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2004-10-19 12:32:18]
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Re: Please Don't Cry
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 12:35:14 PM AEST
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wow, i thought that was hauntingly beautiful, great write,
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Re: Please Don't Cry
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 09:54:50 PM AEST
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Nicely done, Claudia! Geez... I wish I could have written as well when I was thirteen! Please keep writing... something tells me you will do very well!
And... Welcome to YPDC! I hope you enjoy it here and stick around for a while!
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Re: Please Don't Cry
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 03:19:20 AM AEST
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I see a bright poetry writing future ahead of you.
Good work, keep it up
Steve |
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