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Easier way
Contributed by
Catalina
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Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 09:12:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Shall I rise to see sunshine?
Will there be hope in the darkness of night?
Can’t I see what lay ahead?
When will I rest my fears into their bed?
Dare I seek truth today?
Can’t there be an easier way?
What has been a moment in time…
Gives a vision I can’t define…
Believe in your heart
This is only for now…
What may come our way,
Is beyond profound…
Believe in truth, love & infinity…
Some things are only to be felt with in our hears…
Yet never to be seen…
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Catalina
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2004-10-19 09:12:57]
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Re: Easier way
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by ArdRi79 on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 10:30:44 AM AEST
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This poem spoke to me and showed how struggles often lead to faith, I like the way you changed the metre (spelling?) in the fifth stanza it expressed the catharsis of the struggle and the new strength of faith.
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Re: Easier way
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by lovesucks on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 07:42:32 AM AEST
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girlfriend you have such a unique perspective. Good job
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Re: Easier way
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by skyblumoon on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 09:36:29 AM AEST
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Pure power.
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