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ONE DAY MORE!
Contributed by
Robert_Edgar_Burns
on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 09:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Life took on new meaning,
The day that I met you.
When I gazed into your gleaming eyes,
My search for love was through.
The months and years have floated by.
But there’s fire in my heart.
The flames of passion still brightly glow,
As they did right from the start.
I want to taste of your nectar,
And drink often of your wine.
So I know that you my darling,
Will forever and always be mine.
I want to ravish with kisses,
The body and the lips,
Of this princess of my love,
While my hands lift up her hips.
It’s you my sweet dear beauty.
And forever let me stay.
So forever I can love you,
And at least then one more day!
robertburns2@mac.com
homepage.mac.com/robertburns2/…
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Re: ONE DAY MORE!
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 09:49:10 AM AEST
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| Robert great as always,glad to see your work again! Loved this! Christina |
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Re: ONE DAY MORE!
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 11:09:31 AM AEST
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Great poem, Rob,,,lovely to see you again...Hope all is well..
Jenni |
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Re: ONE DAY MORE!
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by emystar on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 12:18:06 PM AEST
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Well handsome,
You already know what I think.
Awesome as always.
I'll be waiting.
Your #1 fan.
Luv,
emy |
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Re: ONE DAY MORE!
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by OreO on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 01:33:56 PM AEST
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Beautiful masterpiece once
again, your poetry is absolutely
beautiful, your a very talented
writer, with as many beautiful
poems as you have, have you
ever thought about putting
them into one big book to
share with the world???
I think that would be so
beautiful. Just a thought!
Thanks for sharing
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: ONE DAY MORE!
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 21st May 2013 @ 11:03:44 AM AEST
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| I don't get why this poem has negative reads. WIERD. Its a good poem for romantic poetry maybe a bit too much detail since kids read this stuff too. |
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