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My thoughts on suicide
Contributed by
viola
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Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 08:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I'm trying to say
just today
you entered my thoughts again.
In fact, it's true
all I do
is wonder why you left.
That sadness you found
left to drown,
was it because of me?
A brother is lost
at what cost.
Do you have your freedom?
Mum, you know she cries,
something in me died
and our family seems broken.
But hey...
what can I say
as long as you're happy.
Please, don't wonder
am I angry at my brother,
I just die a little each time.
Copyright ©
viola
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2002-11-16 08:40:00]
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Re: My thoughts on suicide
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 09:53:08 AM AEST
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| so many dont realize the hurt on others! Good write! Christina |
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Re: My thoughts on suicide
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 10:30:41 AM AEST
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Hey, I've been there a lot of times in the past year or so and this is a short, achingly honest poem that I can relate to. I like it a lot. Hope yer doin better now.
Peace,
Joel (Bobo) |
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