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No One Can
Contributed by
alliecat
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Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 09:51:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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To find that perfect love is sweet, sweet bliss,
but to lose that love and know that it’s gone,
that it will never again be found and is lost forever,
burns a hole through your heart.
There comes a time in every tragic life,
a time to ask yourself one fatal, fatal question.
And the answer is what everyone yearns for,
but deep down despises.
The one question where the answer is always feared,
always tucked away in a hidden spot,
never to be mentioned, never to be forgot.
What’s wrong with me, with who I am?
No one loves me, no one can.
I don’t love myself,
can’t love who and what I am.
Why should they,
when I doubt myself?
Who would want to love me?
I don’t love me.
What’s wrong with me, with who I am?
No one loves me, no one can.
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alliecat
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Re: No One Can
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by Live2Die on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 09:56:15 PM AEST
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Really good poem.
I'm only hoping you don't truly feel this way, because know if you do, there is always someone out there who loves you. Always. |
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Re: No One Can
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by VonDutchChick08 on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 10:08:54 PM AEST
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| I really love this poem!!! I like the way you expressed your feelings, because what you said in your poem is really true...or at least I think so. Keep writing...this is a really awesome poem!!! -Ashlee |
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Re: No One Can
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 12:43:55 AM AEST
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As I read this... I felt as hough u had written it about my friend in Florida... she says when she looks at herself in a mirror... she hates what she sees and can figure out why anyone would love her... Her signature line on here is no one can hate me more than I hate myself...
She a very beautiful person... but has a very tragic and sad life...
Thanks for sharing this... it was another good write...
~Donna~ |
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