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why?
Contributed by
tearfulchild
on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 09:03:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I wish I had a God send,
someone of whom I could depend.
I stuck to you to the end.
even when the corners turned around the bend.
we changed our styles according to our latest trends.
you of all were my best friend.
the reason you left I couldn't comprehend.
I miss you... feel as though its my fault your soul wouldn't mend.
I tried to cheer you up,
I asked you what was up.
no answer at the door,
a pang in my chest, my stomach became sore.
I cried my eyes to sleep, when I saw you on the floor.
something sharp, into two it was me it tore.
I just don't understand.
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2004-10-18 21:03:22]
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Re: why?
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 09:31:30 PM AEST
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| I don't think anybody can really understand a person's motives for suicide...i'm really sorry to hear about your friend, maybe some people out there will realize how much others care about them |
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Re: why?
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 09:43:15 PM AEST
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| heart wrenching write. |
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Re: why?
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by Doriens_Picture on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 03:22:21 AM AEST
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from a person who has tried to kill themselves many times and came very close
sometimes our souls die along time ago and our bodies live on as a chell till its time comes sometimes it never does so we have to kill our selves
i dont know
i am just rambling
greatly a sad write |
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