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Fading
Contributed by
tearfulchild
on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 08:47:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I look in the mirror,
the image begins to smear.
A blurred Painting struggling to become clear.
the walls spin, no sounds do I hear.
Inner child sheds a tear.
Copyright ©
tearfulchild
... [
2004-10-18 20:47:44]
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Re: Fading
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by sandy_poetrygodslove on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 08:51:48 PM AEST
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| I can placed this poem in the list of the most beautiful... great write.. sandy |
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Re: Fading
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 09:55:51 PM AEST
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| that was amazing. short and sweet. such talent shown in just five verses. |
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Re: Fading
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 04:52:51 AM AEST
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| i love it! |
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