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My Everything
Contributed by
xXAgainTwiceXx
on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 08:06:05 PM in AEST
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Here I stand
Miles away from comfort
Longing for you once more.
To feel your touch.
To feel the way I did before,
When your fingers filled the spaces between mine.
I'm desperate
Once again
For your lips, your smile
To see the shine in your vibrant blue eyes.
I choke down the waves of emotion
Wishing for the past,
When you were everything,
When everything was my only prized posession.
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xXAgainTwiceXx
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2004-10-18 20:06:05]
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Re: My Everything
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 08:44:09 PM AEST
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| brilliant write. i liked this once. i hope you can get some more posted soon =] |
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Re: My Everything
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by Willofree on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 10:05:52 PM AEST
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Very succinct and intense... you get to the essence of your need for your love.
I liked it, and thought it was a very good write.
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Re: My Everything
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 07:12:09 PM AEST
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Ahhh...Britt, as I have told you a million times over, awesome write...Keep doin' yo thang, homie
Mason |
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Re: My Everything
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by theMoth on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 04:17:32 PM AEST
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I like it enough
that I am interested in
seeing more from you.
Keep writing!
--Mothy |
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Re: My Everything
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by screwup on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 11:18:14 AM AEST
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a very good write expressed with real emotion... great piece...
~screwup |
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