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To: The One
Contributed by
2ndChance
on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 07:59:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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You are the sleeves that cover my scars,
you are the one,
who,
instead of visitng me in jail,
will be sitting next to me,
saying,
"wow. what a crazy time that was."
You are my advice,
and my sun.
You are my warm summer breezes.
You are the one I would call,
and say,
"I just murdered somone."
you would reply,
"where do we hide the body?"
You are the one who pieced me back together,
using up all of your glue.
You are the one who'd always give me the red crayon,
when only the ugly black one was left.
You are the only thing,
that makes me feel safe.
You are the song,
I can't get out of my head.
You are my favorite lipgloss.
You are the one who brings me my favorite flowers,
without a hesitation of the outcome of my day.
You the ever-loved holiday,
that people wait for all year long.
You are the one who always told me,
"Shoot for the stars,
because even if you miss,
you'll land amoung the stars."
You are the one who saved me from jumping.
You are the only reason I live.
Too bad I haven't met you yet.
Copyright ©
2ndChance
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2004-10-18 19:59:48]
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Re: To: The One
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by StoneAngel on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 09:00:18 PM AEST
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| What a beautiful poem, I wish I could find the one. So many ff and a bf that doesn't really want me. what can I say, this poem touch my heart and longed for the person you were discribing. |
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Re: To: The One
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 09:43:33 AM AEST
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A very climatic ending that was quite powerful to read.
I hope you find the one, keep looking, and never give up.
Well written.
Kie |
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Re: To: The One
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by Live2Die on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 12:55:28 AM AEST
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| I just am simply not going to say anything for fear of under-describing this poem. |
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