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Shall I Love Thee Forever
Contributed by
stew
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Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 07:47:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Shall I love thee forever?
And hold you in my arms;
On a bright stary night, whenever,
We can make passionate love without harm.
Shall I cherish thee?
And never let you go;
Love you for eternity,
To help our love grow.
Shall I help thee care?
Care for me, you truelove;
We make a wonderful pair,
Just like a hand fits in a glove.
Shall I love thee forever?
We can make our love an endeavour!!!
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stew
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Re: Shall I Love Thee Forever
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by 2ndChance on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 08:01:47 PM AEST
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| An exquisite poem, very heart-warming...my friend call me Thee Kat...Thee for short, so your title really stood out to me. *three cheers!* |
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Re: Shall I Love Thee Forever
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by a_bear on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 09:10:32 PM AEST
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| It's good, but it is filled with old cliche's ; that is things that are old and worn with time, that makes it sound copied..so you might want to make it sound more original by going to a thesaurous and looking for synonyms..looking for other words you can use..things that mean the same as forever.. or the same as true..or pair for instance.. |
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Re: Shall I Love Thee Forever
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 09:27:04 PM AEST
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Cliche or not, I thought this was lovely. Straight from the heart.
Wonderful write stew!
~Breezy |
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Re: Shall I Love Thee Forever
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by Bruce on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 11:50:14 PM AEST
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| lovely, keep up the great writing |
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