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I am Suicide
Contributed by
2ndChance
on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 07:38:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I am an empty emo lyric.
I am the trigger of a gun.
I am the knife you use to slit your wrists.
I am the one your parents warned you of.
I am the count-down on a bomb.
I am your parents who don't understand.
I am all the tears of hate.
I am the pills you overdose on.
I am the ledge of which you sit.
I am the scars of your past.
I am trapping you in this life.
I am the noose on which you hang.
I am the love that was taken away from you.
I am wrong in every way.
I am the blood you shed each night.
I am the darkness.
I am the rain.
I am a nothing.
Just like you.
I am suicide.
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2ndChance
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2004-10-18 19:38:35]
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Re: I am Suicide
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by Live2Die on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 08:32:17 PM AEST
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I applaud the poem, but I must say it holds many lies. You are not all that. In fact, I beg to differ with the entire poem. You are amazing. You are sweet. You are always there. You have made me smile thru the tears. You are someone I and many others I know need. You are not "bad", in any way. You simply have yet see such.
Great poem thought, *applauds*. |
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Re: I am Suicide
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 08:48:23 PM AEST
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| good write. |
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Re: I am Suicide
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by alliecat on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 09:44:52 PM AEST
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| your poem touched me.....sometimes everyone feels that way |
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Re: I am Suicide
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by Jenn2004 on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 10:05:44 PM AEST
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| Great Poem!!! |
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Re: I am Suicide
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by nogoodnamesleft on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 11:42:15 PM AEST
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| good poem!! |
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