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Once So Strong
Contributed by
jesika
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Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 07:17:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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He's gone, I can't believe it
No longer friends, we're done
Every single thing we had
Is left with me, just one
One mind to remember
One person to forget
One heart left to mourn the loss
One more thing to regret
One tear that I cried
For every word he said
One more reason to shut my eyes
And put him out of my head
But I swear it's not that easy
Much harder than they say
I can't just take a friendship
Erase it and throw it away
I can't believe he got so mad
And everything went wrong
All over something that was so small
With a friendship that was once so strong
Copyright ©
jesika
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2004-10-18 19:17:31]
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Re: Once So Strong
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by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 07:55:51 PM AEST
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| Nicely done. I know what it's like to suddenly lose a friend that was once close to you. :( |
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Re: Once So Strong
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 08:50:30 PM AEST
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| excellent write. sooner or later he will feel what you feel too. anger cant last forever after all, and neither can the reasons he left. hell sooner or later put it in perspective. it just depends if it will be fast enough to put you two back on track. |
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