|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Rainy Day
Contributed by
Hopeless_Romantic
on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 06:16:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
|
I cried a million tears
That echoes my hearts pain
Felt my life melt away
As I walked numbly through the rain
I found your lost smile
In a puddle on the ground
And heard your laughter whisper
When I knew there was no sound
I felt your hand graze my face
As the tears you wiped away
Then I blinked through the haze
And saw just a rainy day
I saw your heart go running by
And I softly called your name
You blew a sweet kiss my way
But it melted in the rain
Copyright ©
Hopeless_Romantic
... [
2004-10-18 18:16:45]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Rainy Day
(User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 06:34:17 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Very good poem..i like it alot.. |
|
|
Re: Rainy Day
(User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 06:34:24 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Very good poem..i like it alot.. |
|
|
Re: Rainy Day
(User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 07:55:28 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
So beautiful lovely words
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
|
|
Re: Rainy Day
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 08:01:34 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Wonderful poem, so full of deep emotion and put to words so well....Mike |
|
|
Re: Rainy Day
(User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 11:41:19 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This is beautiful.... melancholy beautiful. I'm rather a fan of poems laced with longing and heartache - and this is one of those.
Nicely done... lovely imagery.
Welcome to YPDC - I do hope you stay a while and continue posting -
SNM |
|
|
Re: Rainy Day
(User Rating: 1 )
by cuddlytiger17 on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 05:16:33 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| wow this is wonderful. You have sum real talent here. this poem really touched me. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
