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In This Place
Contributed by
Elven_Goddess
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Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 01:50:10 PM in AEST
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In this place, They call Earth, A mother had given, A special birth, One that started stories, That a miracle baby was born, Stories revealing terrors, All mothers should take warn, A baby was born, A baby with a gift, To have the power to survive all odds, People had said the baby was God's gift, Throught the struggles and the pain, The baby went through, Her mother still felt in her crying heart, That her baby was going to make it through, They said the little girl, Won't see the day she turns 2, That she wont live that long, But her mother knew, That her baby was strong, And she was meant to be known, Her baby was meant to be heard, Her baby was meant to be shown, Against all odds, The baby made it through, She is alive now, Who knew? People had said, That love was the key, I can't believe my history, Cause that little girl was me.
By: Kayla
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Re: In This Place
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by sabrina on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 02:01:41 PM AEST
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| This poem is amazing, it was very moving. Very very nice job :) |
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Re: In This Place
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by poetmarie on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 03:22:34 PM AEST
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| Very moving indeed and sad. Tragic yet hopeful. |
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Re: In This Place
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 05:35:20 PM AEST
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I guess you could have been done with structuring your poem, but as its your history, it sort of works for me.
Welcome to YPDC. You've made it this far for a reason... |
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Re: In This Place
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by SLipSiX on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 10:13:54 AM AEST
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| Thanks for telling me you submitted more poems :( . Haha just messing with you. Anyway I really loved the words you used in this poem, Very strong, Powerfull. Excellent work baby. |
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Re: In This Place
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 03:43:20 PM AEST
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| You will always become stronger and stronger from this very experience that has happened in your life. It may have impacted your life in a certain way, but you shall grow stronger and develop wisdom and respect towards it. |
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