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The Night You Held Me
Contributed by
flirtyrockstar
on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 07:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I miss the night you held me
Just so I wouldn't be cold
The memory shall be forever enfold
It's for the best I know you'll agree
Although I don't want the dust to be-
What extinguishes your flare
My memories of despaire
Will one day burn in your flames so free
Then hopefully you'll see
That I was true in what I did
All temptation forbid
All I needed was you and me
Deep down forever I'll disagree
That I shadowed myself from your eyes
I wasn't a part of any of those lies
And soon you shadowed yourself from my plea
And in my darkness the light that i'd see
Would be neon lights intoxicating the sky
It just makes me want to cry...
That night, you let go of me
There's one thing to which I'll never agree
That even for a second I let you go
Through my walls our memories show
Even if I'm the only one who will ever see
And that's all the eyes there ever needs to be
They'll burn through our song
"This is MY LETTER", I'll try to be strong
But without you, it really has "been rough for me"
After all the destruction I'm left with all the debris
What you meant will one day unfold
But I'm so thankful, that I was so cold...
That night that you held me
Copyright ©
flirtyrockstar
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2002-11-16 07:00:00]
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Re: The Night You Held Me
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 08:28:38 AM AEST
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This is so sad up until the end. I like it a lot! "Don't be sad that it's over, be happy that it happened." It's hard to do, but that quote does make a good point. Awesome poem, full of feeling, memories, honesty...I love it!
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Re: The Night You Held Me
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by Sarah22 on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 04:34:03 PM AEST
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awesome work
on this poem :*). |
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