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Ace Of Death
Contributed by
crash
on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 01:26:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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This final day, too long it will last
worse than all my days that have past
here I am atop a sinking mast
Alot of pain, today is felt
My card of death has been dealt
Watching my life slowly melt away
my end has come to me this day
No one knows what I feel
all these pains seem unreal
they are too strong for me to deal
But if these pains are untrue
why does my heart hurt for you?
all because you said "we're through"
All this day my pains have grown
wishing sooner I had known
that my life plan would soon be blown
Sitting here looking at the black ace
feeling the pain take me from this place
Copyright ©
crash
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2004-10-18 13:26:53]
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Re: Ace Of Death
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by pixie on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 01:30:39 PM AEST
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sorry you feel like this, hopefully one day you will be dealt a much nicer and happy hand., a very well expressed write of pain and hurt,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Ace Of Death
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by poetmarie on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 03:27:34 PM AEST
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| Very nice write. A poem I know a lot of us on YPDC can relate to. Poignant. |
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Re: Ace Of Death
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by Dying_Angel on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 02:20:45 PM AEST
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| I'm attracted to suicide poetry and some of it can be quite bad but this is excellent Jen x |
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