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A Magic Moment
Contributed by
Wrybod
on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 12:01:37 PM in AEST
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She glides gracefully into view
Spins on pointed toe
the others trace a perfect circle
round and round they go
Her arms stretched out elegantly
extending imaginary wings
gossamer thin and gleaming
fragile fairylike things
A water nymph bestowing
a curtsey or caress
on squirrels, frogs and butterflies
who expect nothing less
With skill beyond her years
she creats a sylvan glade
lakeside peace, tranquility
out of her dancing made.
Then suddenly becomes aware
that she is not alone.....
A pirouette, a tiny splash.....
my water nyph is gone
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Wrybod
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2004-10-18 12:01:37]
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Re: A Magic Moment
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 01:53:24 PM AEST
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Bob, this is lovely. I love to glimpse my grandsons when in their imagination. It is amazing to watch. Great write here.
Rita |
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Re: A Magic Moment
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 08:01:37 AM AEST
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A really lovely poem. I enjoyed this immensely
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: A Magic Moment
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by emystar on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 03:18:28 AM AEST
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Very beautifull. i can see her.
You've created a magic moment masterpeice.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: A Magic Moment
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by LadyDama on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 11:52:31 AM AEST
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paint a pretty picture here
your words have blessed my open ear
yes, you are much a dear
beauty is very near
michele |
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Re: A Magic Moment
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by lillyjane on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 01:05:30 PM AEST
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| This is so beautiful I really enjoyed it..xxx |
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Re: A Magic Moment
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by maestar on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 11:23:34 AM AEST
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GREAT POEM
THANK YOU FOR SHARING
LOVED IT |
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