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The old piano
Contributed by
Mihiri
on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 10:34:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Darkened with age-old dust,
Sprayed on your face,
The years you’ve witnessed
Seem history to all,
The memories re-call
Soft felt you were clothed with,
Once when a babe,
The mistresses fondle you still,
Though there be cobwebs in your ears,
Nothing has changed through the years
White teeth stained with time,
Polished with the touch of the ages,
Some decay and fall when idle,
The rest be a custard yellow,
And in the darkness they shimmer and glow
Copyright ©
Mihiri
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2004-10-18 10:34:25]
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Re: The old piano
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by Kie on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 12:12:48 PM AEST
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I loved your poem. The piano is very special to me and I found this delightful.
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Re: The old piano
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by FleurdeSang on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 03:09:39 PM AEST
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Simply flawless! INCREDIBLE!! I love playing the piano and listening to it; this poem created such sweet music to my ears... I LOVE this poem!! You have such taent! Thank you so much for sharing this magnificent write! May the fingers dance across the keys and create splendiferous music once more... Much love!
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Re: The old piano
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 05:06:22 AM AEST
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I found this in the least read section. What a shame!
Exceptionally vivid and alluring write, Mihiri.
Keep writing. |
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Re: The old piano
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by Stitch on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 10:42:13 AM AEST
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This is beautiful. I could picture the piano. I always wish things like this had eyes, and I could read their memories.
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Re: The old piano
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 04:10:43 PM AEST
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| beautiful, cant wait to hear more. |
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