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Love Like Vikoden
Contributed by
eyesxcriedxout1989
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Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 09:39:09 AM in AEST
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Total joy
The feeling of being complete
Lying next to you
Under the dancing stars
I turn to you
Moonlight shining in your eyes
Crystal clear
And I feel myself melt away
Falling asleep as our lips are locked
We sleep entwined, so quiet
The suns warmth wakes me
And you, still in my arms
Is a comfort
Your sleeping eyes flutter
As dreams romance you
I dare not wake you
Though I whisper
"I love you"
My anticipation is already building
For this next night
So we can kiss the stars again
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eyesxcriedxout1989
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2004-10-18 09:39:09]
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Re: Love Like Vikoden
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by FleurdeSang on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 03:14:46 PM AEST
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This is so sweet, xeyesxcriedxoutx1989! I love it! Such a splendid flow! Very beautiful. I can tell you love your girlfriend very much! I have felt this emotion many times before. You have described it so eloquently and gracefully! You're very talented, eyesxcriedxout. Don't let anyone tell you different. I thoroughly enjoyed this masterpiece, and will visit it many times in the future! Nice job! Thank you for sharing! Much love!
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Re: Love Like Vikoden
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 09:19:48 PM AEST
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Beautiful. Simply beautiful. You are very lucky to have someone who
inspires such a lovely write.
~Breezy
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Re: Love Like Vikoden
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 07:38:16 PM AEST
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Awesome title.
Good stuff.
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Re: Love Like Vikoden
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 12:15:00 AM AEST
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| mothys comment was short but he meant it. mason this was a beautiful write, although how do you know about vicodin. you shouldn't know about that, and where are you and this girl staying, cause yo mama would have a cow. i am just giving you a hard time, i really loved this peice of poetry. |
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