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Bowl Of Fruit
Contributed by
Cynthia
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Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 07:54:13 AM in AEST
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On the coffee table
it sits in front of me,
filled with apples and bananas
what is it they speak?
Are they saying
hello to one another?
Or are they fighting?
Maybe they're playing games with eachother.
They sit there
in the bowl silently,
on the coffee table
in front of me.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Oct.16/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
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2004-10-18 07:54:13]
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Re: Bowl Of Fruit
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by inoc on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 08:01:33 AM AEST
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there you go a bowl of fruit....
now what am I to write about hey?lol
your write was written well by the way!
cheers!~ |
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Re: Bowl Of Fruit
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by Rxqueen on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 08:13:37 AM AEST
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| That was cute. It reminded me of the time I was at my best friends house and she had a bowl of plastic fruit on the table. We were joking and i started throwing the fruit at her. But unfortunately the bananas were not plastic, but wax... there went the bananas... so if those fruit are talking they are cursing me out for killing the tall handsome one of the bunch. LOL. |
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Re: Bowl Of Fruit
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by Kie on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 09:37:23 AM AEST
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This is depth and a love for thinking about things we seem to overlook.
It is like seeing beauty and strength in a weed that sprouts up from the cracks in the concrete and contemplating its beauty.
Very enjoyable poem.
Kie |
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Re: Bowl Of Fruit
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 09:43:15 AM AEST
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good writing... did you end up painting them?
you should... *smiles*
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Re: Bowl Of Fruit
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by a_bear on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 11:03:21 AM AEST
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| they're saying, " we're not gay and we don't care what anyone says about us being in a bowl together ..or about the bright colors we wear...call us fruits if you like; we aren't gay, but we are very happy. " lovely poem. |
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Re: Bowl Of Fruit
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by a_bear on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 11:04:10 AM AEST
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| oops..I can't comment twice..sorry. |
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