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Inspire Me World
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 07:49:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I sit here
surrounded by these
four off white walls.
I look around
and I see toys
left behind
by a little boy.
I lean up
against the wall
and look around.
Inspire me world....
but,
I'm left with nothing.
Lately....
I'm finding it harder
to think of titles
and words to write.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Oct.15/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
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2004-10-18 07:49:35]
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Re: Inspire Me World
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by bluoreo on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 07:51:55 AM AEST
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| inspiration will come. dont worry. when you least exspect it. good write |
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Re: Inspire Me World
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by inoc on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 07:57:38 AM AEST
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ditto!
I'm feeling the same....
but your write made me realise...I bet we arn't the only ones!?
Now to inspire....(maybe someone like Bernard or Stitch or Kie Kie could help us?)
cheers!~ |
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Re: Inspire Me World
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 02:03:29 PM AEST
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Nice work you have a unique direct style, well written cynthia.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: Inspire Me World
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by thewordzwithin on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 08:39:04 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this poem. I don't know if it's just me, but I laughed. I pictured a mother in her house, sitting at the table trying to think of something to write and all around her was the mess her child left for her. I thought this poem was very vivid yet straight to the point. Great job! |
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