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In love with the Devil
Contributed by
Rxqueen
on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 03:45:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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You want our souls to be interwoven
into the flawless silk night sky
to whisper in the darkness
like the flirting lights of fireflies
wouldn't the thought be so lovely
wouldn't we be in bliss
so its a shame that your really the demon
and I am in love with your kiss
You crept into me like a disease
festering and waiting
all along the take over
you sat plotting and anticipating
Slowly you took my heart
for you and only you to keep
you said you would look after it
but instead you let it weep
you sat it down in a stagnant pool
mutilating it with lies
all the while smiling and grinning
looking into my eyes
It is too late for me to go
I am tainted and full of your parasite
So I let my self be taken over
by you, the demon of the night
and now that I am yours alone
in this morbid love affair
do you really still think
we make a beautiful pair?
Copyright ©
Rxqueen
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Re: In love with the Devil
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 09:13:33 PM AEST
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OMG!!! This was excellent!!!!! REALLY REALLY EXCELLENT!!!!!
This truly blows my mind. Perfectly described and what wonderful word choices.
Great job!!
Boy do I relate....
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Re: In love with the Devil
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by UnlovedChild on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 08:24:00 PM AEST
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This was great. Sweet one your talent is true...never give up!
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Re: In love with the Devil
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 10:33:35 AM AEST
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This is stunning, and I am so sorry that people haven't been commenting on it, It could have just been a bad day, I am also sorry I missed this.
This is worth a definate '5''
The flow is stunning and I couldn't stop reading, and the words just seem to work together perfectly.
I adore this.
I wouldn't change any of it.
Great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx
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Re: In love with the Devil
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by theMoth on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 04:27:54 PM AEST
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The first stanza really
captured my interest.
The second stanza
only intensified it.
An excellent poem.
--Mothy |
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Re: In love with the Devil
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by TeRrahiel on
Friday, 10th April 2009 @ 03:43:46 PM AEST
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| Absolutely perfect. In my opinion, it should be turned into a metal song:) And then it would be a great success. |
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