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October
Contributed by
Rxqueen
on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 10:36:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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As the chill in the air begins to creep
into my heart it too seeps
I cry out for warmth on this bitter night
but I hear no answer to its delight
please someone hold me I am sacred
no one answers this simple prayer
As I wander deeper into the wood
it is getter colder as I pull up my hood
i thought i would find you on this night
but as I walk deeper all I find is fright
I tried to be brave and strong for you
but you let me down as you always do
so now I am lost, shaking, alone,
no one here to guide me to my home
only the whipping wind howling in my ears
and a fear that still resides in me after all these years
starting to run soon becoming out of breathe
and quickly following i fear is death
my body begging to collapse on the ground
but then, by what will i be found
so i push on through this cold October night
in my head I ponder if this way is right
and as I give up and alow myself to fall
i hear behind me something starting to crawl
it comes ever closer step by step
i try not to move hold my breathe
I feel the hairs standing up on my back
along with a feeling I can describe as only black
and as it brushes up right behind me
I know Its all over, FINALLY
Copyright ©
Rxqueen
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2004-10-17 22:36:26]
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Re: October
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by Clementine on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 10:50:01 PM AEST
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| Great writing...and Rx Queen is a great song :) |
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Re: October
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 11:09:14 PM AEST
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This is brilliant, it flows perfectly and the ending couldnt be better. Excellent write, I love it. Very inspiring
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: October
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 04:23:16 AM AEST
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| awesome |
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Re: October
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by UnlovedChild on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 08:13:26 PM AEST
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| Hey Sweet one!!! Oh my gosh this is touching ... it is sad, but speaks the truth ... it pulled me in. Great job again! Keep writing strong. |
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