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Far Away

Contributed by Lovely_4_steve on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 10:07:35 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

I'm so far away
I feel like I should have something to say,
I want to tell you all these things
but I cant,
because
if I did,
you wouldn't understand,
I hate it because
I'm actually caring,
and I hate it that I cant leave like I want to,
I hate it that your feelings have changed
its wierd because
you said you loved me two nights ago,
and all of the sudden your feelings have changed,
it's like whoa,
I don't understand
I'm so lost,
I want to freaking scream at this world
I hate it because of the way you are being.
It's like unreal
you are so fake.
You are acting like.... like some unknown person.
I wish I could just ***** say these things to you,
and let you know how I am feeling
because it seems to me like it doesnt even ***** bother you to tell me how you feel.
Which is great because I like to know how you feel.
But it seems to me,
like you do care, but you are pretending you don't because you don't want to get hurt...
But it's hurting me.
It is hurting me so bad,
because I care so damn much.
I try not to but I cant stop...
Its like I'm so far away and I should have something to say..

Copyright © Lovely_4_steve ... [ 2004-10-17 22:07:35]
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Re: Far Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 04:33:08 PM AEST
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wow...that's all i can say! this is a truly amazing poem.

great write

- Beth -

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