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Wish
Contributed by
nicbagsgirl
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Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 09:13:46 PM in AEST
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Ever wish you would die
to end all the pain you feel inside?
Ever wish you could float away
and forget all the sorrows you faced that day?
Ever wish people could see,
All of your pain and suffering?
Ever wish they could understand
and maybe reach out to lend a ***** hand?
Ever wish you had just one friend
Just one person to care and make your pain end.
Ever wish that when you were home
That you didnt feel so damn alone.
These are the wishes I make every night,
praying my darkness will fade and I will someday see light.
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nicbagsgirl
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2004-10-17 21:13:46]
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Re: Wish
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 09:27:53 PM AEST
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| amazing write. excellently written. |
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Re: Wish
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by Chanti on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 09:44:54 PM AEST
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I wish, i wish, i wish every single word of it. Im right there with you.
-Chanti |
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Re: Wish
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 11:15:08 PM AEST
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i know this feel all too well.....its like me exactly....kinda scary lol.....fantastic write....awesome job!!...I loved it!!
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: Wish
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by Mick_Puttock on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 05:08:18 AM AEST
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| Well put, and join the club! |
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Re: Wish
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by Kazzy1231 on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 03:27:17 PM AEST
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| I feel like that 2! *Hugs* |
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