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The dawn has come
Contributed by
Archie
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Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 08:44:15 PM in AEST
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I dream for better days
than ones that came before
I hasten to the dawn
to renew dreams once more
As winter turns to spring
my sorrow turns to song
I hear the sparrow sing
as I approach the dawn
Continually I try
to see the best in life
though dreams do pass me by
I strive to do what''s right
I''m only but a man
and mistakes do I make
I hope you will forgive
when ever I lose face
Dreams rise up like the flowers
with in the times of spring
refreshing times have come
a time when I can sing
The winds now blows softly
away my troubles shrink
I made it to the dawn
and now my heart can sing
I made it to the dawn
and now my heart can sing
Sing songs of summer
The night time''s over
Sing gleeful solace
Joy is replenished
The night was hard and long
but it is finally o''re
the promised dawn has come
bringing a time of song
I''ll sing the whole day long
I made it through the storm
Copyright ©
Archie
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2004-10-17 20:44:15]
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Re: The dawn has come
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 09:11:57 PM AEST
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Wonderful poem. Very inspirational. I love this!
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Re: The dawn has come
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 09:31:44 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. well done =] |
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Re: The dawn has come
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by sweetangeluk on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 01:35:29 PM AEST
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Go Archie
Beautiful words great rhythm
Love Sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: The dawn has come
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 09:39:02 PM AEST
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I too, have felt this.
Wonderful write Archie.
Beautiful.
~Breezy |
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Re: The dawn has come
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 04:03:51 PM AEST
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beautiful, gentle and hopeful:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: The dawn has come
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by emystar on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 11:30:47 PM AEST
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A masterpeice of very deep feelings-n-emotions.
I never sleep at nite but sleep after dawn. So I can relate to this write in my own way.
Sad but great write!
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: The dawn has come
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by theMoth on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 04:31:32 PM AEST
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Excellent as always.
--Mothy |
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Re: The dawn has come
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by skyblumoon on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 03:34:11 PM AEST
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Very beautiful. I enjoyed it quite well.
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Re: The dawn has come
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by Lee on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 01:59:23 PM AEST
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This is a good poem filled with clarity.
However, the obscene reference to the
night was rather inappropriate...just kidding!
Keep up the good work, my good man! |
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Re: The dawn has come
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 04:43:02 AM AEST
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| Yes my Friend you have really made it through the storm- Great poem.bernard |
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Re: The dawn has come
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by brew on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 07:31:12 AM AEST
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| Such words, and heart..........beautiful write. Thanks, for sharing. |
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