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Fast Dreams
Contributed by
cuddlytiger17
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Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 08:10:55 PM in AEST
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Racing through another dream
Panic is the enemy
Must stay calm,
Must stay cool
Hide yourself, silence rules.
Another game of Cat and Mouse
Dashing through an empty house
Shattered windows, smashed alarms
Solitude the only charm.
Pick up speed
It’s drawing near
This dream is over-
The future here.
Copyright ©
cuddlytiger17
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2004-10-17 20:10:55]
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Re: Fast Dreams
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 08:27:00 PM AEST
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Great write.
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Re: Fast Dreams
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 09:45:52 PM AEST
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| excellent write. |
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Re: Fast Dreams
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by theMoth on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 04:34:59 PM AEST
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I really liked this.
Especially the shattered windows
and smashed alarms.
And the ending
is really cool.
--Mothy |
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Re: Fast Dreams
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 10:04:11 PM AEST
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| short and exciting, i have never read a more short and engaging poem, this was so awesome, once again ann you poetic prowess shines thru. |
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