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For Many Many Years
Contributed by
Elven_Goddess
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Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 08:08:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I can't believe it's over, I can't believe it's done, It ended so quickly, Seems that it just begun, Whenever I saw you, I stop to think, Will this love last forever, Or will it just sink? Into the ground, Right where my heart lies, All hope is fading now, Hearing all my cries, In my head they are, Sick of all the tears, I thought we would last my love, For many many years.
By: Kayla
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Re: For Many Many Years
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 09:49:55 PM AEST
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| excellent write. written very well. you cant count on the future, and you showed that very well. |
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Re: For Many Many Years
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by SLipSiX on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 08:47:59 PM AEST
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| I like the words you used in this poem 4 stars, good job baby :D. |
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Re: For Many Many Years
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by Cynthia on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 07:37:30 PM AEST
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| This write is so sad. So full of emotion. Very well done. *S* Cynthia |
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