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Time is Tormenting
Contributed by
linagalMBfan01
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Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 05:23:01 PM in AEST
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I look at the clock
it is now one
I look again and it's still one
why does time move so slow
the answer is time just wants to torment
When you need some time
it moves too fast
then other times
you want something to go away
but time just takes its time
Other times you want time to last
a moment that is just wonderful
you wish that time could be
stopped right then and there
but time stops for no one
Some times your hurt
and wish it did not happen
so you want to move time back
back before you got hurt
but time and the past cannot be changed
The reason time is tormenting
is because we don't live in the moment
or regret, or we don't use the time we have
but if you don't regret and use time as it comes
then time might not torment
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Re: Time is Tormenting
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by Archie on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 05:29:45 PM AEST
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| That was interesting. You had quite a few misspelled words in your poem. Besides that it was good. |
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Re: Time is Tormenting
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by sweetangeluk on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 12:45:30 PM AEST
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Fantastic I loved it. You described time so well.
Excellent write
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Re: Time is Tormenting
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by hellsfallenangel on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 09:21:48 AM AEST
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hey nice writ and your right time
doesnt answer to noone well g2g ttyl bye
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Re: Time is Tormenting
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by Baby_Grl on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 11:40:59 PM AEST
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Hey Lina grl, this is a good write but man it really confused me at first but its really good. nd your write, time doesnt answer u it goes at its own pace of ways. lol. Write more I love to read. Check out mine if you want.
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