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In my Dreams
Contributed by
tiffy
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Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 03:22:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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in my dreams
the ground is white
the midnight sky
a beautiful sight
i look and see your hazel eyes
we look up and see
a bright star fly
as we make a wish
you take my hand
pull it up and we both stand
you lean in to kiss me
soft slow and sweet
everytime our lips touch
my heart skips a beat
i feel so safe
wrapped in your arms
im happy around you
your like my lucky charm
it hurts to know
we'll never be more than friends
you may not know this
but a broken heart isnt easy to mend
it would be so much easier
for you and for me
if i could live forever
in my dreams
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tiffy
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2004-10-17 15:22:14]
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Re: In my Dreams
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by theMoth on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 03:50:38 PM AEST
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Welcome to the site.
A beautiful write
full of emotion
and imagery.
--Mothy |
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Re: In my Dreams
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by Archie on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 04:02:34 PM AEST
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| Great disription of your feelings. True love will come and it will overshadow how you felt when you wrote this. |
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Re: In my Dreams
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 05:40:41 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC...Remember, dreams do come true.... Good write..
Jenni |
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