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Haunting
Contributed by
FiggySue
on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 03:07:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Your promises were so many,
Your truths so few.
I held onto the dreams, that could never come true.
Years passed by me, life took you futher away.
Still loving you despite each obstacle in my way.
Bound tightly by memories of a time when we
were one.
Denying the bitter truth, my plans for us would forever remain
undone.
Clinched tightly in your grip, I fought to gain control.
Begging God for strength to let your memory go.
Longing to be free of the pain you left in me.
Desperately searching for a saviour to set me free.
Now that the battles over and I can learn to love anew.
I still sometimes find myself thinking about you.
I know now I was in love with the man I longed for you to be.
Instead of the demon you were, you are, constantly haunting me.
Copyright ©
FiggySue
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2004-10-17 15:07:14]
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Re: Haunting
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by screwup on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 03:16:07 PM AEST
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reminded me of my ex who beat me a lot... and that was hell... I see what your saying... he still haunts my memory today, and that was two years ago... fantastic write of haunting memories.
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Re: Haunting
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by Archie on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 03:21:44 PM AEST
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| Great poem. I can't say I have been in that position yet. Your poem describes it well and I hope when i fall in love to avoid such complications |
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Re: Haunting
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by theMoth on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 03:27:08 PM AEST
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Well written poem.
I especially liked the last two
lines.
--Mothy |
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Re: Haunting
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 11:26:37 AM AEST
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wow. i really do hope you showed this to the person it was written for, because it's sure to have an impact.
great write.
- Bethani - |
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