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Devil in Bed
Contributed by
calista
on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 02:51:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Devil in Bed
October 17, 2004
You were my first
Now the connection is vague
Lost in the shuffle
Of my ongoing days
My first to touch
My first to kiss
My first to cause tears
My first to miss
Now left behind like everything is
The memory that was
Stuck in those changing years
But you were my teacher
You showed me how
Now I go on letting others see
What you showed me
You showed me a kiss
That was gentle, then desperate
I've taken that kiss and to give to another
You showed me a touch that made my sanity split
I've altered that touch to bring someone elses pleasure
You showed me I could scream, sometimes shudder
I've taken that delight to show to another
You were my first
I was unstable, unsure
Now I am strong, I know how to lure
Now I could show you how I have changed
My first to touch
My first to kiss
My first to cause tears
My first to miss
I am a devil in bed
I know my tricks well
You showed me Heaven
Now I'll show you Hell.
Copyright ©
calista
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Re: Devil in Bed
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by clotti on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 02:54:59 PM AEST
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| i really like this it made me smile and feel sad all at once i like the way that you are kind of thanking this person for what they gave you and then telling them that you took it all from them and gave it to someone else. keep writing because your good at it |
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Re: Devil in Bed
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by screwup on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 02:56:24 PM AEST
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N~I~C~E... very well writen... and I liked it a lot...sounds evil to me :)
~screwup |
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Re: Devil in Bed
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by theMoth on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 03:46:53 PM AEST
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that was cool.
I like emphatic endings like that.
Very well concieved.
--Mothy |
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Re: Devil in Bed
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 05:03:28 PM AEST
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| this ended exactly how i thought it should ... lol... steamy...good write. |
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