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It Was Almost Goodbye
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 01:12:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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It was almost goodbye,
I just sat there & cried,
I felt like my heart had been torn in two,
As I was about to lose my wonderful you.
As I lay all alone in my bed,
Looking at the pillow where you rest your head,
Tears trickled down my face,
Heart had lost its beat & its pace.
To say I missed you doesn’t even begin,
For us to be apart is more than a sin,
We are made for each other I hold no doubt,
My life would be so empty if you weren’t about.
As we sat there faces so glum,
To each other we couldn’t help but succumb,
A night without you felt like an eternity,
Alone with the heart ache & the uncertainty.
This morning we held each other so tight,
From the darkness into the daylight,
Together is where we truly belong,
As in our souls we share a song.
The fire between us will never die,
Never again I will have to deeply sigh,
You are the holder of my heart’s key,
Together by your side is where I want to be.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-10-17 13:12:22]
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Re: It Was Almost Goodbye
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by theMoth on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 03:49:12 PM AEST
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Sad, but then a beautiful ending.
Awesome.
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Re: It Was Almost Goodbye
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 08:39:40 PM AEST
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Sad at first then a great happy ending! Great write.
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Re: It Was Almost Goodbye
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 12:00:31 AM AEST
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| beautiful write so romantic! |
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