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Nothing More Than An Other Dream...
Contributed by
omega_
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Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 12:41:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Dreams of rosy holiday
Lights of joy all over the way
Fantasies about the 1st meeting and how it will be
Beautiful visions about you and me
Days full of worry and upsetting
But it was only my patience the reason why I could wait
And nothing can stop me for more to create
So excited, so optimized about that date
Oh God all those fantasies and dreams really looked so great
But it’s again and again all my hopes were vain
Sounds like loneliness choose me, as it’s infinite mate
What else I shall do? And till when I should wait?
While my life’s gift is my damn miserable fate…
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2004-10-17 12:41:44]
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Re: Nothing More Than An Other Dream...
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 12:53:52 PM AEST
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Lovely write.... You are young still.... you'll get there eventually....
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Re: Nothing More Than An Other Dream...
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by Socke on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 03:03:03 AM AEST
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It just remmember me of myself....I can't wait, still dream, have my hopes and wishes for love...but that's not the way life workes.... u can search but will not find cuz love is a gift.
Hm....miss our chats ;) And understand ur feelings in this poem v good....
Hug u
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