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I Have No Secrets & Tell No Lies
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 11:28:50 AM in AEST
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I have no secrets & I tell no lies,
I’d never do anything to make you cry,
I cherish you & your heart,
I never want for us to be apart.
Love means sharing & that I do,
I share every part of me with you,
There is nothing you don’t know about my past,
I would tell you anything that you asked.
I could have lied about things I did,
But I had the whole truth & I wanted to bid,
You deserved to be told every detail,
I didn’t want to lead you down a false trail.
I believe that love speaks the truth,
So I told you about my dysfunctional youth,
Told you that I suffered from anger & depression,
I hoped that you could make my hurt lessen.
My heart is true as are my words,
Never will my love for you be unheard,
No matter how far you travelled,
A love as deep would never be unravelled.
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Re: I Have No Secrets & Tell No Lies
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by little_genna on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 11:39:52 AM AEST
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Krissie,
This is amazingly beautiful. It is full wisdom that comes from someone so troubled when young. I only hope that you carry on living your life to the full as you are a incredibly special person
take care hun
Gen xx |
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Re: I Have No Secrets & Tell No Lies
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by clotti on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 11:41:10 AM AEST
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| i like this. i am glad that you have found love for it sounds as if you deserve it. i like your style keep writing |
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Re: I Have No Secrets & Tell No Lies
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 11:46:25 AM AEST
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Nice write and the best way to be, i can't tell lies i normally start laughing i'm the worlds worst!
Honesty in relationships is so important
5 stars! |
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Re: I Have No Secrets & Tell No Lies
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by emphaticplacebo on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 11:52:37 AM AEST
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pix,
Another beautiful write. Sounds like you have found what we all want, and I hope it flourishes for you. Very sweet words and nice rhyming, great work! |
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Re: I Have No Secrets & Tell No Lies
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by Lionel on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 01:30:02 PM AEST
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| Very good poem. Good attention to rhyme. Good heart. God bless. |
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Re: I Have No Secrets & Tell No Lies
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 08:44:37 PM AEST
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Beautiful awesome write. Full of love. I love it.
Spazzo |
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Re: I Have No Secrets & Tell No Lies
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 12:10:43 AM AEST
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| Another great love poem. I really liked the message, how your heart was so open and true. That's just the way I started my relationship with my husband. I wanted it all out there then let him make the decision whether or not he could deal with all of me. It turned out very lucky for me, sounds like things went pretty well for you. Much peace. |
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