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Why do you still love her?
Contributed by
clotti
on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 06:58:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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stop your love for her.
its time to let go,
look to the future,
she did you so wrong
you were so vunerable
how can you possible ever love again?
she destroyed you but you cant see it,
every other girl can not compare to her,
why is she still the one that holds your heart?
she had hold of you for so long.
let her go, walk out of her life,
you deserve more.
please don't get hurt again,
it tore you apart, still does, the slut
take it back
give your heart so someone else,
and they will love you back
remeber that feeling?
feel it again
reclaim your heart
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clotti
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2004-10-17 06:58:54]
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Re: Why do you still love her?
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 07:52:23 AM AEST
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I agree with what you are telling this man, but I am a bit confused. She is your girl, but you are taking his side and calling her a slut? Saying the no other girl can compare to her , then saying he deserves more... Maybe I am just reading it wrong..lol
In any case this is a strong write
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Re: Why do you still love her?
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by little_genna on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 12:00:18 PM AEST
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Im with Larry on this one im a little confused though it is a really gd write.
love
Gen xx |
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